Embrace the remembering

Poetic Dan

 

From deeper within duality resides
From that womb that holds us tight

This is where it all began
This is the release of time again

There was a moment
Both things existed

We were one in same
Although you let go

Your love still holds
On this one way road

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 16th, 2017 07:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Thoughts of my mother, thoughts of my sister thoughts from all the females that I know and the one inside me.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Chloe Rachel Flisher

    Truly beautiful, thank you for sharing.

    CR x

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you for reading, and I'm sure you know that the comments are deeply appreciated 😉

    • Fay Slimm.

      A wonderful reminder of the time we were dual - -- the inspired phrase that will stay with me Dan was "here was a moment Both things existed" - a super read.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you I'm honoured to of had an impact, I shall love with a bit more pride know the Ripples I am making.

      • FredPeyer

        PD, this is truly an amazing poem. I love the way you refer to the duality, not only in us, but in everything. Our black and white, our yin and yang, our good and bad.

        • Poetic Dan

          Ha, think that's maybe why I got it half and half tattooed last year on my hands, so much has changed in a year and then monthly, now it feels like daily. Thank you sharing my journey with me

        • F.G. Franklin

          The duality of mankind is expressed wonderfully here in a juxtaposition of relationships and loss. Where we learn and grow as we move through life's joy and sorrow. Wonderful write.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you so much, that had been my life and I'm finally greatful for all the really really bad, and the outstanding good.
            Your comment is truly appreciated

          • dusk arising

            To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved is amazing. Sure we see feminine motherly love and its an example mostly traditional man has cast off but it seems us poets have retained that feminine side within our psyche. Our feelings spill out. Really nicely expressed toughtful writing sir.

            • Poetic Dan

              As is your reply my good man. Thank ever so kindly



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