From deeper within duality resides
From that womb that holds us tight
This is where it all began
This is the release of time again
There was a moment
Both things existed
We were one in same
Although you let go
Your love still holds
On this one way road
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thoughts of my mother, thoughts of my sister thoughts from all the females that I know and the one inside me.
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Truly beautiful, thank you for sharing.
CR x
Thank you for reading, and I'm sure you know that the comments are deeply appreciated 😉
This is an amazing write Dan. I really, really like it. ; )
Thank you so much, I do love seeing your name pop up.
It reminds me to just do what I do, even if I miss spell it or put punctuation wrong, maybe even missing some words.
I'm an accidental poet just trying to make a difference on this planet 😉
And long may you keep doing as you do. I try to proof-read everything I write, but still sometimes I make a mistake. Mistakes will happen. ; )
A wonderful reminder of the time we were dual - -- the inspired phrase that will stay with me Dan was "here was a moment Both things existed" - a super read.
Thank you I'm honoured to of had an impact, I shall love with a bit more pride know the Ripples I am making.
PD, this is truly an amazing poem. I love the way you refer to the duality, not only in us, but in everything. Our black and white, our yin and yang, our good and bad.
Ha, think that's maybe why I got it half and half tattooed last year on my hands, so much has changed in a year and then monthly, now it feels like daily. Thank you sharing my journey with me
The duality of mankind is expressed wonderfully here in a juxtaposition of relationships and loss. Where we learn and grow as we move through life's joy and sorrow. Wonderful write.
Thank you so much, that had been my life and I'm finally greatful for all the really really bad, and the outstanding good.
Your comment is truly appreciated
To all men i think motherhood is amazing. The unconditional love involved is amazing. Sure we see feminine motherly love and its an example mostly traditional man has cast off but it seems us poets have retained that feminine side within our psyche. Our feelings spill out. Really nicely expressed toughtful writing sir.
As is your reply my good man. Thank ever so kindly
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