Today I woke up about 5AM,
To absolute mayhem.
You start to throw around accusations,
When I defend you without hesitation?
You think the world is so against you,
But have you looked at your so called “crew”?
You befriend people who play your weakness,
But they are what is causing your life’s bleakness.
You’re not in touch with your inner self,
All you care about is your wealth.
Do you really think that it is worth it,
For your relationships to be always split.
You need to think about yourself,
You’re not really looking at life itself.
We aren’t here for a long time,
So make it your most precious dime.
Because someday you may live to regret,
That you always stay in your comfort net.
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Author:
Chloe Rachel (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 16th, 2017 08:08
- Comment from author about the poem: This is about a recent a break up, I have found it hard to come to terms with. But through poetry it has been the way to get things off my chest.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
😔😔 sad soul
I know 🙁
Chloe, I like your writing style. Straight to the point! Good rhyming as well!
At my age I realize that 'less is more', that inner values are more important than outer accumulations. Money comes, money goes.
I do like your poem!
Hi Fred, thank you so much for taking time to read it and leave feedback. I really appreciate it, I haven't been writing long. Only started this year so I'm glad you liked it.
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