Why should I


When I called you mine you promised you would treat me right

you promised you would never lie but when i ask about that night

i get a different story every time 


why should i give you another try

every time you told me a lie i could see it in your eyes

so give me one good reason why 


I think about it all the time 

about how my family cried 

and how it changed my life

the night i almost died


so why should i give you another try


  • Author: spencer.mast21 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 26th, 2017 17:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: well about 4 years ago I was poisoned by my girlfriend and her friends I was in ICU for several days and almost died. now she is wanting to get back together with me. I was laying in bed and I thought up this poem my mom said it was vary good but I am not so shurr about it
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  • Clock King

    In time you will get a flow of your own. But like beauty, art is in the eye of the beholder. Just write as you want leaving nothing back. There will always be critics.

    P.s. i like the poem

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