I'll skip the "Dear" and "Hello".
I want you to look me in the eyes,
and never tell me how much you love me.
I want you to take me on simple dates,
where we can laugh and appreciate,
appreciate some time together in this incredibly short existence.
I want you to see me cry; the good and the bad.
I want you to look up that song you've never heard,
by the band you'd've never guessed was a thing,
even if your only comment is, "I might".
I don't want you to yank on my heart strings,
but I'd choose that over them tearing.
I don't want your confessions of love,
but I don't want your silence.
I want your embrace,
but remember some days I need space.
There will be times our love will die, soon after it hopefully revives.
I know its not what you signed up for when you said,
"Would you like to go on a date sometime?"
but I took it to heart, gitty and blushing
I can't describe it, what better thing to say than, "I'm crushing."
But know I've been here. Right here, before.
When I thought love was an open door.
Someone else ensured tears would fill my cheek's pores.
But here I am, again, only slightly sore.
- Author: Adrianna Kjeld (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 29th, 2017 00:43
- Category: Letter
- Views: 25
Comments4
Adrianna, nice poem, you tell it how it is! Love the last line! No matter what happens to us, there will be a time when that door needs to be open again.
Thank you so much!
Exactly.
Well written and expressed
Thank you so much!
Welcome
Great poem very well put together.
Thank you! 🙂
I believe Fred said it best, :You tell it like it is." Some of us wander through many doors, before finding the prize. Sort of like Monty Hall used to say, "Will it be Door #1, 2 or 3?" Love is a fickle penny, you never know where you will find it. Your poem describes a kind of love we all seek, a shared love, one of trust and understanding. I've often described it as a love that requires no forgiveness. First time I've read your stuff, will return for more. - Phil A.
Thank you so much for your input, I really do love reading comments like this.
I am also very grateful that you enjoy my work, and I hope to continue to impress.- Adrianna
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