Awakening
Rosebud of desire
blooming
hotly centered
in spirited passion
awaking from her dream
still looming
languidly
stretching dainty limbs
silky laughter
on soft full lips
the warmth of her voice
fills him
with all the vibrations
echoing of
strains of silken laughter
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I think I'm in love with this delightful damsel, and love your poem describing her awakening! Well done, Cat!
why, thank you, Louis! what a very nice compliment 🙂
*hugs, Cat
A ballad with lots of sensuous meaning - - loved the imagery too Cat.
thank you Fay, a pleasure to be your hostess 🙂
*hugs, Cat
Cat, this beautiful poem brought to mind the picture of an innocent girl growing into a beautiful, yet still innocent woman. The 'rosebud of desire' growing into a beautiful full fledged rose.
Beautiful writing, perfect choice of words!
thank you Fred,
you always are so nice to me and say the sweetest things...I appreciate you so much!
*hugs, Cat
Cat, thanks for the appreciation. But know that I am not being 'nice', I am being truthful. You are an incredible writer and many of your poems (not all, but hey, we cannot be perfect all the time) do touch me deeply. This one for example just had that air of innocence. I read it a few times and each time it seemed to grow on me. While I am not the greatest writer, I can recognize and appreciate good writing!!! 🙂
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I love this sensual poem! Wonderful description throughout. Absolutely beautiful! hugs--Christina
thank you Christina 🙂
*hugs, Cat
Yes, what a gem. So sweet and delightful. You can be versatile on your work. Love this.
thank you malu for the compliment 🙂
*hugs, Cat
Very nice. Great start to my day reading something so sensual. Thank you for sharing.
and, thank you for reading and commenting!
*hugs, Cat
Beautifully Written
thank you, Tony!
*hugs, Cat
Welcome
Sensual but sweet. Got a little flush.
thank you, laser, that is sweet!
*hugs, Cat
This is a beautiful poem lovely to read , sensual, yet innocent, good work
dear WL,
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*hugs, Cat
Beautiful sensual loving write Cat.
thank you Goldfinch!
*hugs, Cat
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