Candlewitch

Awakening

 

Awakening

 

Rosebud of desire

blooming

hotly centered

in spirited passion

awaking from her dream

still looming

languidly

stretching dainty limbs

silky laughter

on soft full lips

the warmth of her voice

fills him

with all the vibrations

echoing of

strains of silken laughter

Comments10

  • Louis Gibbs

    I think I'm in love with this delightful damsel, and love your poem describing her awakening! Well done, Cat!

    • Candlewitch

      why, thank you, Louis! what a very nice compliment 🙂

      *hugs, Cat

    • Fay Slimm.

      A ballad with lots of sensuous meaning - - loved the imagery too Cat.

      • Candlewitch

        thank you Fay, a pleasure to be your hostess 🙂

        *hugs, Cat

      • FredPeyer

        Cat, this beautiful poem brought to mind the picture of an innocent girl growing into a beautiful, yet still innocent woman. The 'rosebud of desire' growing into a beautiful full fledged rose.
        Beautiful writing, perfect choice of words!

        • Candlewitch

          thank you Fred,

          you always are so nice to me and say the sweetest things...I appreciate you so much!

          *hugs, Cat

          • FredPeyer

            Cat, thanks for the appreciation. But know that I am not being 'nice', I am being truthful. You are an incredible writer and many of your poems (not all, but hey, we cannot be perfect all the time) do touch me deeply. This one for example just had that air of innocence. I read it a few times and each time it seemed to grow on me. While I am not the greatest writer, I can recognize and appreciate good writing!!! 🙂

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          • Christina8

            I love this sensual poem! Wonderful description throughout. Absolutely beautiful! hugs--Christina

            • Candlewitch

              thank you Christina 🙂

              *hugs, Cat

            • malubotelho

              Yes, what a gem. So sweet and delightful. You can be versatile on your work. Love this.

              • Candlewitch

                thank you malu for the compliment 🙂

                *hugs, Cat

              • Simple-Man87

                Very nice. Great start to my day reading something so sensual. Thank you for sharing.

                • Candlewitch

                  and, thank you for reading and commenting!

                  *hugs, Cat

                • Tony36

                  Beautifully Written

                  • Candlewitch

                    thank you, Tony!

                    *hugs, Cat

                    • Tony36

                      Welcome

                    • lasergraph

                      Sensual but sweet. Got a little flush.

                      • Candlewitch

                        thank you, laser, that is sweet!

                        *hugs, Cat

                      • WL Schuett

                        This is a beautiful poem lovely to read , sensual, yet innocent, good work

                        • Candlewitch

                          dear WL,

                          I'm glad you enjoyed it!

                          *hugs, Cat

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Beautiful sensual loving write Cat.

                          • Candlewitch

                            thank you Goldfinch!

                            *hugs, Cat



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