Bald Sails
Strong gales
Sailors bail
Wind and rain
Lightning maims
Sirens sing in the storm
Wives will soon mourn
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Author:
Sugiura Asuna (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Bald in its original meaning meant shining white, this is why the animal Bald Eagles are called BALD Eagles.
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SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a kind of minimalism, but it tells the whole story. Very well written!
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