Sonnet Attempt

Simple-Man87

Let me take you on a journey

An emotional labyrinthine

Where in the midst of a mans heart burning

An Angel would intervene.

 

Cold, dark, broken and lonely

This shell of a man wandered the streets

His gait was crippled as he motioned slowly

With both hands in the air, accepting defeat

 

His knees buckled as he hit the ground

The light from his minds eye, began to dim

When the sky cracked with a thunderous sound

The Angel from his dreams stood before him

 

With her hand placed upon his heart

Forever together, never to part. 

  • Author: Simple-Man87 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 29th, 2017 12:58
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Christina8

    You did such a good job on your first sonnet! You should be so proud of this! I love the ending when the Angel came and placed her hand upon his heart. So sweet! Looking forward to more!--Christina

    • Simple-Man87

      Thank you Christina. You are far too kind. That's my favorite line too.



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