Its Raskolnikov


This is an adventure,

I've fallen again,

Maybe this time it won't break when it bends,

Maybe it won't matter that I follow my own trends,

Maybe when the music starts the beat will drop,

Maybe when she takes my hand the love will flow but our hearts will stop,


Take the lead,

Move your feet,

Follow your heart,

It'll make you see,


Dance and smile,

Whirl and twirl,

Live and laugh,

Love and conquer,

I'll make a cry to heaven,

I'll meet you at the crossroads of twilight,

Moving on the wheel of time,

I could lose myself in your eyes,

God, you're so kind,

You have the most prepossessing mind,


To hear your beautiful laugh,

To see your shine when you smile,

You can lean on me like a staff,

Will you stay with me, just a little while?


  • Edward Charles McDevitt

    Good write Its! Love is a tricky thing, and I believe you seem to have it mastered. It is the wooing and cooing of a courtship that makes Love so tricky yet exciting! I loved this! Well done!!!

  • FredPeyer

    Ras, looks like you are dancing all the way to heaven here!
    Nice writing!

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