Take my hand

Poetic Dan



Today I told you something I felt so deep
Words for everyone, yes! including me.

I treasure and value every word and part that is you
With these eyes beginning to sprinkle you know its true

Once we understand there is nothing we can't do
Whatever one dreams of doing, they shall come too

Let go of fear and let that imagination run free
Endless possibilities of all things to be

So take my hand and walk with me
In the beautiful life that we can live

"Because I love the life I live
The laughter and the tears
I don't know where it's going
But I like it like it, is."
Last lines stolen from brother Ali

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2017 12:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: These words came to me while a friend and I (she's a healer) were talking deeply about our life. I thank her and all for helping me find this love inside. May it continue spreading as I read, hear and see all the pain in this world. With my hand as open as my soul, I offer to walk with you on this road.
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
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  • Louis Gibbs

    Very inspirational, Dan! Well written, and I love that third stanza.

    • Poetic Dan

      It is a favourite song called "fresh air" I thought it would end it nicely. Glad you agree 😉

    • FredPeyer

      PD, this is a poem to live by every day of our lives. Very inspirational, beautifully written, this is a keeper! Print it out and hang it on the wall.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you my friend, it was as delightful to write and feel, as your comment was to read.

      • Pintu Mahakul

        There is love and there is life. Deep words are told today. This is really very brilliant expression shared here.

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you kindly, my heart is in everything that I do. Glad to if shared them with you!

        • Fay Slimm.

          Such a special read Dan - so pleased you have found the way to love the life you live - - may rainbows of happiness dance you through dark days. This must go in my favourites.

          • Poetic Dan

            What a privilege to me, and thank you so much for seeing off my darker days ahead 😉



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