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"Peaches En Regalia" -Frank Zappa, 1969
don't go for grape stompers
they'll drive you crazy for months
always smashing and retreating
promising wine and warmth and legs
then one day they'll drop through the bottom
and start fucking girls
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Author:
Big Swifty (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 4th, 2017 20:37
- Comment from author about the poem: this is my most bukowski inspired poem about someone who doesn't deserve another goddamn stanza of my brain
- Category: Love
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Comments1
I like this Bukowski inspired poem of yours, BS! Am a big Bukowski fan.
You adapted your writing very well to his style, got the wine and the f...ng, the only thing missing is the cigarette!
Great job!
Oh, nearly forgot: The title is just great!!!
Glad you liked it, and trust me the cigarette is never missing when I feel like Bukowski 😀
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