I lay still
The bright light of the phone screen
Blinding me
But I have never been as blind
As I am
When I'm around
You.
- Author: YoungAndNaive (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 6th, 2017 13:53
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 22
I lay still
The bright light of the phone screen
Blinding me
But I have never been as blind
As I am
When I'm around
You.
Comments2
A sweet tribute, Young! Welcome to MPS!
Thank you!
Welcome to MPS, Y&N! Well written, like the short/long/short line structure.
Love makes blind, and you expressed that beautifully.
Aww, thanks for the lovely comment!
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