The Honey Moon Phase

Adrianna Kjeld

The honey moon phase is taking  place, 
And  I've got nothing but adoration when I look at his face. 
My friends who are closest say, 'it is dear',

while my oldest friends say, 'be careful', and 'don't fear'. 

I've taken these words to the heart, 
I know that we're just at the start, 
but his gentle ways strike like a dart. 

He treats me right, and he's smart. 
He loves his mother, and gives his remarks. 
It's the littlest things that create the sparks. 
There was a connection made between our hearts. 

I know it seems silly, right now you see, 
but I hope you can grasp how happy he makes me. 
I'm much less than perfect and that I'll admit,
but if you saw how great he treats me, I feel you'd been smit. 



  • Author: Adrianna Kjeld (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 6th, 2017 23:02
  • Category: Love
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  • dusk arising

    Nice writing. Lovely sentiment here, long may it last for you both.

  • FredPeyer

    Adrianna, love your poem overall, like the wording, the rhyming, the structure and the subject matter....until the last word on the last line. I know it rhymes, but to finish such a beautiful poem with that kind of word, somehow does not feel right.

    • Adrianna Kjeld

      I meant it humorously but I definitely understand why one would dislike that particular word choice. Thankful for your input, as always- Adrianna

      • Adrianna Kjeld



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