tepo

Numb

A candle flickers through the night

An eagle makes it's debut flight

Still fresh the taste of her last bite

Her numbness dulls her pain

 

Stood on the edge afraid to leap

Dry ducts betray the urge to weep

The promises they couldn't keep

Her numbness dulls her pain

 

When Cupid sent his arrow true

It pierced her heart when sailing through

She smiled through tears as he withdrew

Her numbness dulled her pain

 

The cherub failed the gods just laughed

She braces for the arctic draught

She navigates the seas by raft

Her numbness dulls her pain

 

Her voice resounding loud and clear

A happy life is drawing near

She heard the words she longed to hear

His love it dulled her pain

Comments4

  • Diamond

    An excellent sharing. "Dry ducts betray the urge to weep" I know that feeling. Beautifully penned. Much respect. Namaste.

    • tepo

      Thank you Diamond
      For read and lovely comment
      Appreciate it
      Namaste

    • Christina S

      I just love this poem. The last stanza is so inspirational. "she heard the words she longed to hear". The whole poem is fantastic! Another fav!

      • tepo

        thank you Christina
        another great comment
        makes me want to write
        ta

      • FredPeyer

        tepo, you did it again! Another great poem, beautifully written, good rhyming. What else could we ask for?

        • tepo

          thank you Fred
          appreciate it
          ta

        • Goldfinch60

          Glorious write tepo, love conquers all.

          • tepo

            thank you Goldfinch
            lovely comment
            ta



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