It's not an easy thing to learn
How much pressure assert
Giving it all you have, while holding back
Trying to not hit the ground
If you hit that ground it's an awful sound
It goes more than through your hand
You will be resharpening that thing till the morning dawns
Rethinking how to use your force thats inside our core
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Some random thoughts that came to me while chopping wood and thinking of Kat being so much better than me at it. Mixed with deep meaning of course, probably only makes sense in my head too ;)
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An apt piece of imagery brings the right feel to this verse on using our inner force for reshaping our challenges - - good advice Dan
Glad you saw what I did, thank you kindly
This one definitely does not only make sense in your head, it makes sense, period!
How many times did we use excessive force when just a little bit would have been enough. And I am not only talking physical here, the same goes for our head.
Great poem, PD!
Now you make me work, trying to rethink that awesome force inside me! 🙂
Thank you so much, I think that was near enough my though as I went straight through a piece. Your words always help my shoulders feel supported. A wise, true soul you are my friend
To give it your all and end up tripping, is better than doing nothing and falling. Incredible write Dan!
Word to that one my friend. Really appreciate it
Careful and thoughtful planning will bring desired results. Great write Dan. ; )
Not sure I did all that but as always my mind just went with the flow, funny how easy it is sometimes 😉
Sometimes going with the flow is the way to go. (no pun intended) ; )
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