Love hurts

My heart is now in so much pain,
my tears are falling like pouring rain.

I can no longer sleep a full night,
I can no longer fight.

We broke each other's hearts.
We were torn apart.

We are no longer together.
What happened to forever?

No one can save me from the dark's might.
This time there will be no light.
I'm not going to fight.

There's no reason to.
When I did fight, it was for you.

I know I never did show how I felt.
Just believe me,
every time I saw you,
my heart would melt.

Just know...
I loved you then,
I love you still.
I promise,
I always will.

I don't know why
we had to say our goodbyes...
but I'll love you till the day I die.

My heart is broken,
but I still have hope.

One day
we might get back together.
Maybe next time will be forever.


  • Egyptianqt79

    beautiful 💔

  • FredPeyer

    Nicely penned, good rhyming, Olivia. A sad tale, with a hopeful uptick at the end. Well done!

  • Simple-Man87

    This brought forth so much emotion. I've often sat and thought the same thing, but you expressed it so beautifully. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.

    • Olivia1697

      Yes I write all the time got told I'd never be anything and my whole life I was abused and emotionaly screwed with and left and best on by xs so I put all my feelings down on paper

      • Simple-Man87

        it's very powerful to read. thank you for sharing. I know a thing or two about being hurt. I'm here if you need someone.

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      • olivergreenwood19

        This is so amazing! Thank you for posting this!

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