My friend.....

Aaliyah Gisele

She has a smile, only one of a kind,
It is just so beautiful, like a happy illusion of the mind,
Honesty isn’t just her habit,
It was the way of her life,
The truth on her tongue sometimes feel sharper that a knife,
Kindness sort of dwell in her heart,
She has a dream to turn the world into art,
She has a kind and caring heart,
She is a gift of nature’s living art....

  • Author: Aaliyah Gisele (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 21st, 2017 04:46
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Jmcg

    Great job on this. I hope you don't take it wrong if I point out grammatical errors.
    On line five I would change feel to felt and that to than. In line six change dwell to dwelt. Other than that great write.

    • Aaliyah Gisele

      Thanks but why fix it?

      • Jmcg

        Just my opinion

        • Aaliyah Gisele

          Thanks

          • Jmcg

            Ur welkum

            • Aaliyah Gisele

              Hey. Sorry I took so long. I hope you can forgive me

              • Jmcg

                No need to apologize. You've done nothing wrong

                • Aaliyah Gisele

                  Ok. Please continue reading my poems

                  • Jmcg

                    I will. You keep reading mine and let me know your thoughts

                    • Aaliyah Gisele

                      Ok



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