Aaliyah Gisele

My friend.....

She has a smile, only one of a kind,
It is just so beautiful, like a happy illusion of the mind,
Honesty isn’t just her habit,
It was the way of her life,
The truth on her tongue sometimes feel sharper that a knife,
Kindness sort of dwell in her heart,
She has a dream to turn the world into art,
She has a kind and caring heart,
She is a gift of nature’s living art....

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  • Jmcg

    Great job on this. I hope you don't take it wrong if I point out grammatical errors.
    On line five I would change feel to felt and that to than. In line six change dwell to dwelt. Other than that great write.

    • Aaliyah Gisele

      Thanks but why fix it?

      • Jmcg

        Just my opinion

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