Like the Flower, Nothing would be as sweet as she. She would be protected and full of passion. Innocent being, not phased by anything. Courage she would believe in, love she would hope in. Naive she would never be; She would be beautifully smart. Omniscient. She would be thought as perfect, so she would rise from failure. She would be truly real and speak her mind openly. It wouldn't be harsh though she would be considerate. Unlike most individuals in the thought of mankind. She would be liked by many. She would never fear of being alone. She would never be me. Unblemished. Pure. Poised. Gracious.
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Author:
lay lay (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ~~~Como la flor (como la flor), con tanto amor (con tanto amor) Me diste tú, se marchito Me marcho hoy, yo sé perder Pero, Aaaayyy! Cómo me duele Aaaayyy! Cómo me duele~~~ Translation:::::Like the flower (like the flower), with so much love (with so much love) You gave me you, withered I leave today, I know to lose But, Aaaayyy! How Aaaayyy hurts ! How it hurts.~~~ This poem is about the sister my brother and I never had. My brother gave her this name and it sounds fitting to the poem. To be honest, I knew I wanted to incorporate a metaphor of a flower in the poem and I also wanted to list the characteristics I wish for her to have. Which I did, but I never had an idea of putting the concept of all-knowing, or omniscient in the poem. It sort of fell into place and it is funny how I contradict it by saying "She wouldn't be perfect," I mean correct me if I am wrong but she is still human but she is NOT God. She would fail but rise. It also gives the concept of we may fail and decide to try and judge others. For that when we fall and take our last breath we are judged by God and the name Danielle means "God is my judge." I wanted this poem to be very innocent and pure to give respect to the name as a whole.~~~
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Selena. La Reyna de la Cumbia. And LaReynaDeLaFlor. Very beautiful words you wrote.
thank you so much 🙂
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