Do I fucking offend you
So sorry to displease
I am sure you would like me better on my knees
All you want is open legs and a mouth
But if I used it to talk you'd want me out
You really think you're so great
Thinking every girl wants a date
Trying to get all the girls to suck your dick
When it's about the size of a toothpick
Telling them not to choke on it
It's some funny shit
Yet I'm so confused
Should I be angry or just amused
Cause I can laugh but its still sad
You think I need you so bad
But I don't want to be with you
So go find someone else to screw
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Author:
Naeners (
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- Comment from author about the poem: You know what this is about The reason this is not 18+ is cause I'm 17 so that wouldn't make sense. Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed
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Well, Naeners, I am sure there are guys like that. And for these guys your poem is perfect.
I like your writing style, love your rhyming. Your comment about 18+ is just great!
As an old guy, a grandfather actually, I think it is great that young people like you do feel like this. Tell em girl! You are NOT a sex object, you are a smart, kind of sassy mouthed ( 🙂 ) young woman and a good writer!
Woof! I'm an 18+ 'watchdog' checker. lol. I think this should be marked 18+, as under 18's may read it. OK. they're not 'children' and they know what goes on. But for safety's sake maybe.
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