Promise You'll Remember

Naeners

Promise you'll remember me

I do not want to go

but the nights are cold

and it's gets so old

this is no longer home

 

Promise you'll remember me

it's hard to say goodbye

my skin is scared

and its all too hard

I just feel so alone

 

Promise you'll remember me

but not what I've become

remember the smiles

every once in awhile

what I was before I was numb

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 27th, 2017 05:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: My depression is in control now but when I was suicidal I thought it would be interesting for my suicide note to be a poem, now I'm just doing it cause I love poetry. Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed.
  • Category: Letter
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Comments1

  • FredPeyer

    Naeners, while any suicide note is sad, this one is well written. I do like the last line. Am glad though that you have it under control now. Just make sure it never comes back!!! You still have a lot of writing to do.



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