Feeling under the weather

Netashi

  • I really don’t like this world

It makes me sick makes me want to hurl

  • All of its standards and all its rule

What makes you lame or what makes you cool

  • What you can say and what you can’t

If you’re against someone’s opinion they will likely rant

  • Saying that they feel oppressed or attacked

But the truth doesn’t care about feelings and that’s a fact

  • Act this way and not the other

If you don’t your considered worthless or a bother

  • Do want you want they say but I want to be happy

Make money they say but I still feel empty and crappy

  • Happy cant be obtained only experienced

If people heard this they’d think I’m delirious

  • People feel entitled or they have some worth

They make life annoying make it hell on earth

  • I don’t feel welcome in this world but I hope I feel better

Don’t mind me I just feeling under the weather 

  • Author: Ernie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2017 11:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this one awhile back while i was kinda sick so don't worry now i'm better
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 29
  • User favorite of this poem: Orialis M. Pena.
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Comments2

  • Alex Arnot

    Very genuine and steady rhythm. Glad you're feeling better!

    • Netashi

      Thanks Alex

    • Orialis M. Pena

      That's exactly how I feel about everything!
      Great rhymes too!
      Most of my poems are free verse because I can't really make one word rhyme with another. ^_^'



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