Take me god, take me now.
I just want to go, I don't care how.
Ive lived my life, I've had enough.
I give up, it's just to rough.
No more fighting, no more pain.
No more sunshine, only rain.
Take me now, my days are done.
Ill never be, her number one.
So I'd rather go, and call it quits.
No more thoughts, no more wits.
Embrace the end, I'm not insane.
Just tired of feeling, feeling all the pain.
Ive loved and lost, won't love again.
Dont need no one, not even a friend.
Make it easy, take my life.
Before she becomes, some others wife.
Ill close my eyes, take one last breath.
Forget this life, and embrace death.
Dont you worry, I'll be ok.
So long you take me, this very day.
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Wow, very nice, been there, sometimes you have to allow yourself to feel so much pain in order to process what’s going on
You are right, I had to let it out as it was consuming me everyday. I let myself feel the depth of the pain and allowed my heart to bare the sorrow. After then I was able to fold it up, put it away and start over. Words in my writing bare my feelings and my thoughts so well(I hope) that others may be able to sit there and clearly spend a min in my shoes to know what I truly felt.
Don't give up on life so easily. Always stay strong and there will be times and people that will make you think that it was definetely worth it to give it another chance and start again!
Ty for the encouraging words, I can assure you I haven't and I won't. The poem was written more than a year or two back and I'm still standing. I had to pour out the depth of the pain in my words and as many would probably agree many heartfelt loss situations can be accompanied by no longer wanted to be here in order to not feel the pain.
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