Shattered glass and shattered hearts,
binded togther till death due us apart.
Empty screams loud and clear,
I will always be here for you my dear.
Shattered glass and shattered hearts,
binded togther till death due us apart.
Empty screams loud and clear,
I will always be here for you my dear.
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I love how it captures the essence of having love, but having not be able to share it. At least it's what it says to me. It's short and to the point and leaves elbow room to think, Good Job!
That was the idea to get to the point however, I feel as though I should have added more to it or to at least end it cleaner... but thank you for thinking so! x
Well, It's short at understandable for those who do not wish to think about it. As well as short and simple so people can theorize and or relate to it! Leave a mystery!
Welcome to MPS, x!
And you start out with a 'bang'! Well written, great structure. I like how you use two different fonts to separate present from past. All in all a great poem with a lot of meaning in these four short lines!
awww thank youuu so much! 😀 I tried and im glad you noticed. I was wondering if i hadn't made it clear but youve solved that for me xx
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