We sit and we plan.
We make promises and we vow to keep them.
We tell each other of our profound thoughts and of our enlightened moments.
And even if our plans fall through,
And even if our promises aren’t kept,
And even if we stop thinking profoundly and stop feeling enlightened,
theres no one I’d rather get lost with.
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I would call that 'love', Alex.
Very well written, with a lot in-between the lines. Something else that came to my mind when reading was that you could also have added 'even if we don't talk' or similar. Sometimes silence can be enjoyed together.
I do like the way you write, you always make me think, and I guess that is a good thing.
I love the way you read my poetry, Fred! You really really read it and try to decipher it and that’s exactly what I intend! Thank you!!!
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