Cold metal on
tender skin.
Dark thoughts
drowning me.
I long for the
pain;
It is the only thing
making me feel
HUMAN
...But,
You don't let me
carry the scars.
Your hand stops mine;
Your arms bring comfort;
Your spirit gives life;
In You alone I find my peace.
It's not the PAIN
But the LOVE
That makes us
Human
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Author:
Lee Renard Caspian (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
Very nicely written, Lee! Love that last stanza! Great structure too.
Great write
This is fantastic and they are right, that last stanza hits very hard and carries a lot of power. Great write.
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