She waved Goodbye and drifted away,
Away from me, and my crew…
My crew of three.
Me, Lonely -The Dog, and his bitch,
he pulled while peeing on a tree…
I took a long look at her legs,
a beautiful pair of smooth, silky legs.
Now… so distant, so desperate to get away from me…
Lonely barked,
I turned around,
He had his bitch,
I had a long walk back
To my empty, homely ground.
We- three, walked in silence.
We all felt the loss.
The pain, the void she left
in all of us…
The sky above sighed aloud,
A flash, a thunder, a deluge…
Ropes of sorrow came down,
lashing in vain my pain to drown…


  • dusk arising

    You've really conveyed the sadness, pain and loss here. I felt it and the misery of the weather. Really top class writing. Definately goes into my favourites, thank you.

    • BeeGee

      Thank you for your kind words. Very much appreciated...

    • Candlewitch

      I agree with dusk!

      *hugs, Cat

      • BeeGee

        Thank you Cat! Bless you...

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