My beautiful Helianthus
Your beauty radiates like rays of sunshine
Of all the vases between us
You chose mine.
Fed a steady diet of kindness and care
A little bit of patience to allow the bloom
Worth every bit to see your pedals flare
Your soft glow, illuminating the room.
You stand tall and shadow flowers around
The attraction you emit borders divine
Reaching for the sky while stuck in the ground
Your arrangement, a flawless design.
Holding Close to my heart, this life we've built
Mi Angelical Girasol, Mi Amor
Together forever, beyond the day we wilt
Every second of every day am I to adore.
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Beautiful poem about a sunflower! Very descriptive and lovely. Great job!
Thank you Christina. Kind of you read.
Ahh sunflower! *Looks up Helianthus*. I sort of guessed - Helios = Sun. A fine write SM. Conveys comfort in seeing the beauty of the flower.
We have amaryllis. Big bulbs, dead for part of the year, then spring to life. Long green leaves with large red flowers.
Sounds beautiful, Orchidee. Thank you for the read. It's also about a woman. Her favourite flower is a sunflower.
Simple-Man, I do like the metaphor of the sunflower! Your beautiful poem is very tender, with emotion between the lines. Kudos!
Thank you sir. I very much appreciate the compliment.
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