Darkness

jay-money

Darkness surrounds me

Blank and suffocating 

Holding me together by the pieces

Slowing when it fades

Does my walls begin to crumble

Wanting nothing more than to fall

Down Down Down 

I fall deeper into the pit of darkness

  • Author: jay-money (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 15th, 2017 09:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: A poem about the darkness that i deal with everyday
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 55
  • User favorite of this poem: Drewp.
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Comments4

  • Drewp

    Holding me together by the pieces.That line hit me. Resonates with me.

    • jay-money

      I am glad you were able to make a connection

    • Poetic Dan

      Well expressed, thank you for sharing

      • jay-money

        thank your for replying

      • Tony36

        That is why I started writing poems. To deal with the darkness inside. Great Write

        • jay-money

          Thank you that is also the same reason I began writing was to push myself to be more open with what i feel inside myself

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • jonnyc1

            "Darkness surrounds me, blank and suffocating" yes it can, well said. Please keep sharing some really good stuff here.



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