Darkness surrounds me
Blank and suffocating
Holding me together by the pieces
Slowing when it fades
Does my walls begin to crumble
Wanting nothing more than to fall
Down Down Down
I fall deeper into the pit of darkness
Darkness surrounds me
Blank and suffocating
Holding me together by the pieces
Slowing when it fades
Does my walls begin to crumble
Wanting nothing more than to fall
Down Down Down
I fall deeper into the pit of darkness
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Holding me together by the pieces.That line hit me. Resonates with me.
I am glad you were able to make a connection
Well expressed, thank you for sharing
thank your for replying
That is why I started writing poems. To deal with the darkness inside. Great Write
Thank you that is also the same reason I began writing was to push myself to be more open with what i feel inside myself
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"Darkness surrounds me, blank and suffocating" yes it can, well said. Please keep sharing some really good stuff here.
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