Oftener ‘n not we hear of the strange fable
That human life’s worth is countable
Beyond numbers, naught is calculable
Without figures, nothing’s comprehensible
Churn out the stats and happiness is palpable
You’re worth no more than trinkets cumulable
Numbers tell of wealth, that machines can count
Defining our essence and riches that we mount
So all can be matched with others like ourselves
To give us pride in things all by themselves
The pity of junk defining creators
Reversing logic as things control owners
Creditors will insist as lenders want to quote
Ask for scores, for alone they speak of worth
Yet high scores galore for robbers and warlords
But where is my score for the humanity I bear?
On what gauge is my esteem
And my humanity to redeem?
If all were true, how to measure affection?
What scales shall weigh our reflections?
How can happiness meet such criterion?
When all is unseen, untouched but simply felt
Deep in our souls all numbers shall melt
Leaving just quality, that no whip can welt
If all made sense, what of friendships
Richness, growth, or priceless courtship
Companions and mates relieving hardship
Solitude and grief calmed by fellowship
With what gages to place such realities
To solidify kinship with moral chemistries?
Life’s just too precious for her to quantitate
A quality life’s never short, quantities will only vitiate
Neither is it long, whose measure is plain wrong
An insult to it’s worth, unique and always strong
Let numbers define us at our peril
For souls will vanish leaving us cripples
Give me a silky touch of quality
Keep your infinite measures of misery
My heart shall judge the outcome
As shall the spirit rejoice the wholesome
My smiles shamelessly tell the tale
As quality hugs me, gulping me wholesale
© Alwi Shatry, All Rights Reserved.
- Author: Seek ( Offline)
- Published: November 16th, 2017 12:08
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
Alwi, your excellent poem touches on something that has been bothering me for a long time: We are all just numbers. We are defined by numbers, counted as numbers, and most likely just a number when we die.
Great, great poem!
Thank you Fred for your very considered thoughts and remarks. I am humbled by them. My write rekindled some nagging feelings buried deep inside my own conscience for some time. This was cathartic. Sadly we are being left to our own devices to keep our humanity intact. And this would require extraordinary courage and sacrifice. Sadly too, few places are left for us to seek refuge and reinforcement. I fear that the modern religion of worshiping our own inventions and submitting to their enslaving us keeps gathering more followers with no end in sight.
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