Letting go but holding on

Poetic Dan

Not knowing is the worst
Unable to feel that energy flow
That holds you so tight
As if never to be let go

I am accused of manipulating minds
Maybe because I enjoy a rhyme
My thoughts are out as an open book
Nothing to hide, no agenda is a foot

My goal is to be better, reflecting on all I do
Not saying I know it all, just mostly of me
That I don't use words like idiot or stupid
Knowing that positive thoughts feed the mind more energy

Through every day I learn to play
Teaching new patterns in my finger tips
The violins vibration soothes my ear drum
Guitars strings help the stomach breathe
With all this I let go of how others make me feel

But when all else fails
I sit down in verse
Go through my thoughts
Good or bad they cannot be ignored
I ask for the wisdom to not hold on
So I can stand my ground without letting go

This is me, I've never let go yet
I know how to bend my knees
My light can never be taken from me
Now more than ever I'm proud to keep walking
Every moment leading to the freedom from within
Understanding that the freedom is not free
The price I pay with my never-ending tear


 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 17th, 2017 04:36
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Accidental Poet

    Your wisdom speaks loud and clear with every write Dan. Let no one accuse you of wrong intentions with your writing. I see a poet with a great heart, writing for what he believes, freedom of the soul.

    • Poetic Dan

      The words of reassurance, I thank you kindly friend for feeling my words and my pulse through the pen

    • myself and me

      "Letting go" is easy to say but hard to do. Very well penned.

      • Poetic Dan

        Absolutely and my life has lead me to with stand this storm, as I read others words and release my own.
        In knowing I'm ready for it all!

      • Tony36

        Well written and expressed

        • Poetic Dan

          As always my friend appreciate the read and comment

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • Christina8

            This poem is full of wisdom. It's clear that you have a great big heart! So happy to hear that you are not going to let them take away your light. Very positive poem. Thanks for sharing!

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you for helping me get here and write these thoughts. I will try with every breath to live by my words and thoughts, although I'm sure I'll still stubble along this path but endeavour to not let hate guide my way.



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