Thank you

Dakota

Thank You

I don't know if you will read this.

But I think it is need less,

to say that your are one of the greatest 

you probably hear this everyday.

 

Swear this is different more of a thank you.

Getting past my hard times I am going through.

and giving me Hope for the places I am 

going to.

 

I lack confidence and direction.

But when I write  these words that rhyme from

my heart seems to be the best selection.

Although this might sound sappy 

every story you write that real shit makes

me happy. 

 

My family aint pretty either.

but I Would not trade my mother for another 

even if she was a murderer using a butchers cleaver. 

But what I mean, I am the man 

paying the bills since I was 16.

Just waiting for the grass to turn green.

 

However I feel out of luck 

and I can relate to those who feel stuck,

playing that song Cheer Up my heart heavy with sadness

im drowning Fuck! 

 

Then Sideline Story plays

I can feel my dream and my mind is in a daze. 

Someone like me made it and that's YOU.  

I dont know if you'll Read This but 

Thank you... Mr Cole

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Dakota (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 18th, 2017 09:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: I sent this to Dreamville productions I don't expect anyone over there to read but if they did how cool would that be.
  • Category: Letter
  • Views: 32
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  • Laura๐ŸŒป

    It would be very cool! Good luck!

    • Dakota

      ๐Ÿ˜ thank you !

    • Seek

      May all turn out right for you. Nicely penned.

      • Dakota

        Thank you โœŠโœŠ



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