Poetic Dan

Amazing grace by the shore



Amazing grace! I sit and wait
To find the peace I need!
Apon these shores, my heart is yours
Please teach me how to see

’Twas pain that taught my heart to bleed,
And grace to heal those wounds;
How gently did it help me breathe
When faith said let go and all returns.

So I've learnt to play your tune
Sending love to the ones I miss
With this vibration and energy
May it hold them when I'm not near

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 19th, 2017 10:30
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Comments5

  • Lawrence the writer

    Nice one. ..

    • Poetic Dan

      Much appreciated. Thank you

    • orchidee

      Good write Dan. It's me fussing about metres again! Or syllables-per-line! This almost fits to the hymn of the same name, with adjustments here and there.
      Any excuse will do, for me/us to sing it! lol.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you so much, there are many more words in my head mixed with feeling when I play, it was hard for me to put them down to read 😉

      • Laura🌻

        Poetic Dan,
        A beautiful write...especially the last stanza! Enjoyed the read and the video! Is that you in the video?
        ~Laura~

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you and yes it is me lol

        • Fay Slimm.

          A touching read Dan - - a gentle reminder too of the value of faith - thanks for the lovely video.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you, I hope I can keep hold of it lol

          • FredPeyer

            Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play 'the tune'!

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you buddy right now music is my only way of channelling my emotions, that won't get me in trouble 😉



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