Oh sunset, simmering day of loss,
...Coasting my imminent stare
into a beautiful plight of hues and longing,
...for your afterglow leaves me on a mar...
Setting off in a precious memory on thoughts
when time stopped, but life must go on...
...for you are the guardian to the door of my past...
Your departure has kept me on afar,
...For your unannounced passing
Has left me bare, on the edge of a star...
Oh love, my departing love
if you can hear me,
and if you can see me now,
for my heart persists on finding you...
Our days will never part
where I can never go,
...and my nights will never cease,
tucked away in a dream
where you will always be,
...for your love will always live in me...
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Author:
Gino (
Offline) - Published: November 19th, 2017 16:10
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Comments1
A great elegy like poem in awesome rhyme scheme. The feelings of loss expressed in fine sentimental poetic style. Thumbs up.
So nice to read from your pen again,
Do pls review my latest too.
Thank you so much S.zaynab.kamoonpuri for your awesome comment. I will review your latest...
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