to just go back to where nothing mattered
all was remembered
would you hold my hand
in places of forever fluorescent
whether plastic
heartless, lost
the feeling it draws
i kept myself for open jaws
would he have kissed me in front of
open lawns
with open eyes
marielle L
3-2016
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Author:
mariellewrites (
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- Category: Love
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Comments1
Powerful first two lines. Also like the 'draws' and 'jaws' rhymes. Well done.
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