JLL517

Reflection of hate

I hate you so much!
For hurting me the most when i knew you the best.
I hate you so much!
For not cleaning up after yourself and leaving this mess.
I hate you so much!
For leaving me broken and never fixed me up.
I hate you so much!
For knocking me down instead of lifting me up.
I hate you so much!
More than anything ive ever hated.
I hate you so much!
More than anyone ive ever dated.
I hate you so much!
And i cant make it much clearer.
These are just conversations that i have in the mirror.

Comments2

  • FredPeyer

    I really like your poem, Vic! Well written, like the repetitions and especially the unexpected last line!

  • Anthony Stafford

    Indeed



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