I watched
A child laughing in his mothers arms.
I watched
A couple holding hands while walking through the park.
I watched
A dog running to their owner.
I am watching
The child crying in his mothers arms.
I am watching
The couple that no longer held hands.
I am watching
The owner running to their dog, that was lying on the street.
I am watching.
I am waiting.
- Author: Adam Shirley ( Offline)
- Published: November 22nd, 2017 03:00
- Comment from author about the poem: Thank you.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 29
Comments2
Well written and expressed
Thank you Tony
Welcome
I like this one. Three scenes spliced together in two very different scenarios and with two different tones. Love the closing line. So much emotion in so few lines. Well done. - Phil A.
Thank you Phil!
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