my first post

MeltingSn8wman

the truth has become an abstract concept to me,

lies and deception feed the darkness in my soul

the darkness which is taking over my being,

i once was full of love and trust

an open book for the world to read

now the pages of my life are scared with tears.

  • Author: MeltingSn8wman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 22nd, 2017 12:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: my first post here would love some feedback
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
  • Users favorite of this poem: Alexa Malyn
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  • Alexa Malyn

    wow, I really like this, very well done.

  • Tony36

    Great write



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