a potato

My secret

Standing drowning dying

at the same time

 

im hurt wanting forgiveness

and sympathy all the time

im crying im staggering

im failing in life

 

Im trembling im hurting

lonliness and dread

and im also smiling and laughing

covering it all

a secret

my secret 

from the world and them all

Comments5

  • Alexa Malyn

    Deep, I'm impressed with this work, as I can relate to it. very well done.

    • a potato

      Glad you liked it!

    • JC

      Melancholy seeps from this poem. Well done!

      • a potato

        Thank you!

      • Tony36

        Great wr

        • a potato

          thank you!

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • upinmyfeelings_

            very well done sis!

            • a potato

              the embarrassment!

            • sjc513

              Very relatable you have a way with words!

              • a potato

                Thank you!



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