caring is sharing.
listen to me.
understand me.
give that to me.
why do you think that.
Ill tell you why you shouldn't --
understand me.
do i know anything?
do i know enough to have an opinion?
understand me.
nothing i think or feel is true?
nothing to give but my agreement
compliant
complicit
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- Comment from author about the poem: As I want some unbiased feedback, I felt reluctant to give my personal message. However, i would like to express that this was written out of the feeling that i do not trust myself. In doing so, I easily want to take my oppositions view point. Therefore I feel I never put myself first - may be to my detriment-- and may be become unselfish, lost in the process where I cant stand by Me.
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Comments1
It's been said (probably by me) that before you can love another, you must love yourself. Without this, you face a life of unhappiness. With this, all others are your equal, until you meet that one true love. Then, you know and feel that this is the one whose life you would choose over your own. And if this love is true , they feel the same way.
Everyone is different, no two the same, all have flaws or imperfections. This is what makes life (and love) interesting. Be happy in your own skin, love yourself, your flaws make you interesting, Love will come along, and when it does, you will know it, you will feel it, you will embrace it.
Your poem spurred these thoughts. Thus, it must be a good poem. For what else can a poet do but cause another to think. - Enjoyed it - Phil A.
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