Are you proud?
Do you know what you’ve done.
When you make them feel all they can do is run.
I ask again. Are you proud?
Are you proud?
That you wouldn't listen to them when they needed you.
Because you didn’t want to help them through.
I ask again. Are you proud?
Are you proud?
When you left them to die alone.
When they wanted you over any caring home.
I ask again. Are you proud?
Are you proud?
When you think that everything is written in the stars.
When for them. It’s written in their scars
So. Are you still proud?
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Author:
Samue10608 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A brief write about dealing with depression and the effects that others can have on you
- Category: Sad
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First one I've written. Opinions on it. IDC if its positive or negative, they all help me get better
Unsure if this is a question of self, or to another. But you've expressed a very deep hurtful pain. A pain of depression that I think many people feel on one level or another from various sources. I think you've written this with a lot of emotion. Well done.
thank you for your opinion. It is unfortunate that many feel like this but do not have the courage to speak out about it so I feel like writing about it is a way of showing it is ok to feel like this and people are there for you when you need them
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