Silver Charcoal

a__pott

Sometimes I feel like I can do anything
Only to then consider that I haven’t yet done anything.
A Silver future
With a charcoal past.
Almost Up in the clouds of discovery
And just crawling up from the dirt of lethargy.

  • Author: Alex (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 27th, 2017 22:07
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20
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  • whoweare

    Good write, easy to identify with. Good job!

    • a__pott

      Thank you so much whoweare! I am so glad that others are appreciating them emotions I put down in words! Thank you for taking the time to read this poem!

    • Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87

      I like how you didn't have to say much to get your point across and leave a good imprint between the charcoal past and sliver lining of life. I also agree with (WHOWEARE) it was very easy to identify with. Great write "Alex"

      • a__pott

        Thank you so much!! I always love hearing feedback, and I really appreciate your positivity!

      • Caring dove

        very good ! 🙂 this is so cleverly expressed , '' a silver future with a charcoal past '' very nice ! i love the wording here



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