I've been eating my feelings
And not taking my meds
I've been drinking too much
And smoking with friends
I've been staying up too late
And losing my mind
I've been losing myself
One piece at a time
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Sad (Pseudonym) (
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You've been eating your feelings
Mine are the only thing on my plate
You're off your meds
and I can relate.
You've been drinking too much and smoking with friends
Drinking and smoking shoved feelings down my throat
and the word friends to me is a joke
You've been staying up too late
and losing your mind
I've been staying up late as well
and my mind is always awake
You've been losing yourself one piece at a time
I'll help gather your pieces up
If you'll help pick up mine.
I am not sure why I commented that way. I hope that it does not offend you. I really enjoyed reading this piece
I really like this, it's a nice response
Thank you & thanks for sharing this piece
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