I've been


I've been eating my feelings
And not taking my meds
I've been drinking too much
And smoking with friends
I've been staying up too late
And losing my mind
I've been losing myself
One piece at a time

  • Author: Sad (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 29th, 2017 04:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Jmcg

    You've been eating your feelings
    Mine are the only thing on my plate
    You're off your meds
    and I can relate.
    You've been drinking too much and smoking with friends
    Drinking and smoking shoved feelings down my throat
    and the word friends to me is a joke
    You've been staying up too late
    and losing your mind
    I've been staying up late as well
    and my mind is always awake
    You've been losing yourself one piece at a time
    I'll help gather your pieces up
    If you'll help pick up mine.

    • Jmcg

      I am not sure why I commented that way. I hope that it does not offend you. I really enjoyed reading this piece

      • pr3ttyshad0ws

        I really like this, it's a nice response

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