stuck on this rock
i can see the ocean
the waves are high and low
fast and slow
no boat in sight
alone in this empty ocean
i sit
lookin out
staring out
seeing nothing but a empty ocean on the surface
quiet i hear the waves
quiet i hear the wind blowing
waiting for a rescue
to help me out of this lonely rock
i close my eyes and count to ten
in one and two
i hear nothing
in three and four
i hear the ocean
in five and six
i feel the breeze
in eight and nine
i hear a sound
in ten i open my eyes
what i see is to my surprise
a epherian ship
going to my way
to my aid
silently i watch
the boat coming closer and closer
i hear the sound of the beast
is not close
but it is not far
the loudest noise
that anyone could hear
from Calpheon to Valenica
every knight
to
every bowmen
they could probably hear it
closer and closer the boat came
and i finally
came free
from this empty rock
of loneliness
i am no longer alone in this empty ocean
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Author:
Sunflower of Yesterday (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
amazing ... a really lovey read ..! 🙂 i love how you have used the rock and the ocean to describe your sense of loneliness and isolation and emptiness , first of all you breath in feeling nothing , then you start to hear and feel what is around you , then you see a ship and there are you .. rescued and no longer lonely ..brilliant , jsut brilliant .. i , myself have a poem were i also used the rock to describe my emptiness, i may share it on here one day
*lovely*
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