My morning eyes
They struggle to open
I lay here sad,
But here I am hoping,
To start my rolling,
To Get me through the day.
Off to a place so safe,
But so far away.
Don't let them in,
Gotta keep them out,
All of The voices
As they scream and shout.
I don't want to listen,
I know they are true
I'm lost got nowhere to turn
On my own
Dont know what to do.
I cry for help it's been said before,
I feel so down,
I'm on the floor.
Help me please,
It's help I need.
I know I can beat this.
I will succeed.
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Author:
E.J.Foreman (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 4th, 2017 04:36
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Comments2
Welcome to MPS! Very good first poem! Starts out somber but ends on a high note. You can succeed! Hope you continue to write more!
Thank you for the feedback. I have been wanting to try putting in to words my thoughts and how I see the world. I still have a lot to learn and I'm looking forward to my new adventure
Many thanks
you can get through it! i understand with all the voices in your head, confusing you, you can always talk to me for help, but then again i have no idea with what im doing with my life as well haha
Thank you Saima for your lovely comment I really appreciate it. I hope I can improve and find an audience for my thoughts, which sometimes are bit dark and weird. I hope I can relate to people who understand
Hope to hear from you again and I hope you like the next one
I would say the best poems are the dark ones, they show struggle but the way the poet shows the struggle is beautiful and keep it up
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