The Broken Fly

LeashaBear56

"What about me?!"

Screamed the fly to the distracted spider

Not a second thought was given

Nor a comment from the web rider

 

The fly sat in silence

Wishing for nothing but to leave

She felt as if a waste of time, 

A useless pile of meat

 

She sat there long 

And started to crumble

Till from her carcass 

There was no mumble

 

She died alone

With no one beside her

No one loved her

Not even the spider.

A6

  • Author: A6 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 7th, 2017 01:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is one of my very first poems, it hits hard still and the story reminds me so much of ''The Spider and the Fly'', let me know what it reminds you of down below, I would love to hear comments and opinions. Kisses!
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 51
  • Users favorite of this poem: Noah
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  • Noah

    I like the rhyming. This makes me think of a flatline. Like, there's a noise, a plea, until there's nothing. Not the beeping, but the way it spikes on the monitor lol

    • LeashaBear56

      That is really awesome! I would have never thought of that

    • Edthepoet

      Spider & Web rider is a genius rhyme! Awesome write.



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