Promise You Will

Naeners

If I fall

 

Say you'll catch me

 

Promise you will

 

Promise you will

 

And when I cry

 

Please hold on to me

 

Promise you will

 

Promise you will

 

And I know you aren't here anymore

 

I swear I'm not delusional

 

But I need you to be

 

Please be here with me

 

Promise you will

 

Promise you will

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 8th, 2017 23:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Missing people who you can never see again is heart wrenching. Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
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  • Poem Goals

    I love how you put, "Promise you will" a lot, because as a reader it makes me want to read more, it's showing a want for the character.

  • Poem Goals

    Feel free read and give suggestions for my poems as well.



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