Santita

Intensity

In the smooth opal of darkness
A rebellious spark of fire is born
Beautifully wild & hypnotic
It ignites where love was once adorned

Wisps of irresistible smoke
Undulate into the dark sky
Intoxicating with desire
& with each flicker it intensifies

Stirring from the black of night
The fire begins to yearn
Enticing with passion-licked flames
& I am dying to burn

Comments16

  • Laura

    Santi,

    “A rebellious spark of fire is born”...
    This line pulled me right into your poem!

    “The fire begins to yearn”...
    and with an incendiary passionate embrace, I seized the vision...a vision to behold!

    The spark never dies!

    A gem of a poem! You always amaze me!

    As always...
    ~Laura~

    • Santita

      I like that "incendiary passionate embrace"! Thank you very much,Laura! Glad you enjoyed :)

      • Laura

        Ah Santi...to be young again! Passion would definitely be my game!!🔥

      • Endlessly

        Wow

        • Santita

          lol
          Wow, Indeed!
          Thank you for stopping by!

        • Songbird

          This is such an amazing poem I am impressed!

          • Santita

            Thank you very much, Songbird!

          • Michael Edwards

            Beautiful piece Santita.

            • Santita

              Thank you, Michael!

            • Goldfinch60

              Superb write Santita, may those stirrings bring something wonderful.

              • Santita

                Thank you very much, Goldie :)

              • FredPeyer

                You are a poetic sorceress, Santi!
                There is a special magic in your poem, setting the mind on fire, where the reader too wants to burn.
                Awesome writing!!!

                • Santita

                  What an awesome comment; Fred, your comments are consistently great! Thank you & thank you for being you!!

                • BRIAN & ANGELA

                  HOLA CARA SANTITA ~ Tu eres una Poetessa muy bonita ! La bonoita es verdedad en la forma de la poema y en las parablas que t'usas ! Smooth opal ~ rebellious spark ~ wild & hypnotic ~ irresistible ~ intoxicating ~ yearn(ing) ~ passion ~ and the final expression "I am dying to burn !" Todas de las parables ignitan un Fuego d'Amor en todos de nos carazones ~ GRACIAS ~ Besos y Abrazos de mi Carazon ~ BRIAN Caballero Romantico XOXOX

                  • Santita

                    Thank you, B! Tus palabras siempres son positivas! Los aprecios mucho! Gracias por tu apoyo! *abrazos y besos*

                  • orchidee

                    A swoony write Santita.
                    Boo hoo, I was burnt out before I started with KP. Burnt out with passion? Nope, with exhaustion, trying to get this ball and chain off me leg! heehee.

                    • Santita

                      Hehe I think you're fire is so strong you are almost numb to it LOL
                      May your fire always burn brightly!

                    • Louis Gibbs

                      If I were a smoker, I'd have to light-up after reading this one. Exquisite mastery of poetic erotica, Santi! Intense, indeed.

                      • Santita

                        LOL I loved this comment, Louis! Thank you so very much, my friend! Greatly appreciate you!

                      • Christina8

                        Oh Wow, there's an instance in which I would like to burn too! HOT poem!! Such wanton desire burns a hole on my screen with this.....awesome job!! I love it!!

                        • Santita

                          Hehehe! Yes, that's what I wanted to burn a hole in the screen! lol. Christina, thank you for all of your support, dear. I appreciate you very much!

                        • Syd

                          Brilliant write Santita - Syd

                          • Santita

                            Hey, Syd, thank you very much, my friend!

                          • dusk arising

                            i wonder, do you remember
                            lusty old burning embers
                            he too had passionate heart
                            when he decided to depart
                            one night, early september

                            good to see the vigour of passion shining thru your poetry today.

                            • Santita

                              Burning embers
                              he was the one around the booth
                              shook it well and broke his tooth
                              then he took off with out a trace
                              I hope he knows I miss his face

                              Thank you, dear!

                              • dusk arising

                                LOL @ tooth

                                ever since you broke his molar
                                that poor chaps been bi-polar
                                im sure he knows you miss him smiling
                                and find his his absence quite beguiling

                              • 2 more comments

                              • LAWLESS

                                In the sparks of a campfire or the passion of lovers, we see the intensity of life. Burp!

                                Entrancing write!

                                Lawless

                                • Santita

                                  Thank you for the burp! Made my night extra special! Lol!

                                • Shadowbox15

                                  I always enjoy your smooth imagery. Even if it’s not about the smoothest topic.

                                  • Santita

                                    Thank you, dear friend!

                                  • LukeCoomer

                                    Stoking the coals, brilliant write 👏👏👏

                                    • Santita

                                      Thank you, love!

                                    • Tristan Robert Lange

                                      "I am dying to burn"...YESSS! Perfect ending to a perfectly expressive poem!!! Love, love, love this write!

                                      • Santita

                                        Thank you so much, dear! Glad you liked it!!



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