The Luit of Dreamy Land

Mottakeenur Rehman

Amidst the heavy rainy season throughout the year,
Weathering the storm,
And setting my feet on both sides,
Of the Luit of my dreamy land,
I am waiting, I am still waiting for you, dear...

Do you give me the responsive ear-kissing tune of life?
To make the riverside flow smoothly,
Towards the far-reaching bosom of the ocean.

  • Author: Mottakeenur Rehman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 10th, 2017 11:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: Luit means The mighty Brahmaputra river.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 27


  • Seven

    Again, awesome!

  • Michael Edwards

    What a charming write.

    • Mottakeenur Rehman

      Don't know whether it is poem or not ...but got a comment from you ..that is precious for me!

    • FineB

      Beautiful, mystical and enchanting.

      Thank you Mottakeenur.

      Keep writing

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely

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