Amidst the heavy rainy season throughout the year,
Weathering the storm,
And setting my feet on both sides,
Of the Luit of my dreamy land,
I am waiting, I am still waiting for you, dear...
Do you give me the responsive ear-kissing tune of life?
To make the riverside flow smoothly,
Towards the far-reaching bosom of the ocean.
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Author:
Mottakeenur Rehman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Luit means The mighty Brahmaputra river.
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Comments4
Again, awesome!
Its my pleasure!
What a charming write.
Don't know whether it is poem or not ...but got a comment from you ..that is precious for me!
Beautiful, mystical and enchanting.
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Keep writing
FineB
Welcome with your precious comment!
you have a lovely way with words, you really do .. this is very lovely
I pleased that you right my poem!
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