On Cloudy Days
The sun always shines
After a cloudy day
Better days you’ll find
When the clouds all dissipate
There will be another
Day when we will smile
And celebrate with our brother
Who knows what clouds are like
There’ll still be rainy days
Every now and then
But even when it poors
The sun comes out again
And there is the rainbow
To remind us of His promise
That the clouds will go away
When they are dark upon us
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Author:
w c (
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Comments2
A fine write and with that promise too, wc.
thanks orchidee. it's always nice to hear from you!
Nice - I like how the structure cycles, sun-cloud-
Not sure about the line-
The sun comes out again
- rhyme sounds a bit forced
Ending - upon us 👏
thanks synesthesia! i really appreciate your comment!
Not at all, enjoyed the read!
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