AlinaVanderson

“Tomorrow”

“Tomorrow”

Tomorrow I might not have you

You could be stolen from my clutch

Tomorrow I might not have you

But you say I worry too much

I’ve been sleeping in your sweatshirt

Because I like the way you smell

Because tomorrow I might not have you

And that might hurt like hell

So some luck i’ll have to borrow

Because I might not have you tomorrow

 

Comments1

  • Synesthesia

    Nice work Alina!

    Thanks for sharing this, I like the break at the end, and the repetition of Tomorrow- like a fear stalking the mind.

    This line though,

    Because I like the way you smell

    It seems wan in here, like could be stronger... for such a powerful sense as smell, there’s nostalgia and comfort and so on

    Thanks Alina,

    Hope you were lucky,

    S

    • AlinaVanderson

      Thanks I wasn't sure about putting that line in but you changed my mind!
      I like the way you look at things my friend.
      A



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