Painting anxiety


Theses sleepless nights 

They pierce the night
The vision o’so empty
I can feel the entity

( Lurking... looking for empathy But how we feel so empty )
Both linked yet separated
The links are created
We where both created yet we both are hated

This feeling created for feeding
On the week it prays
Lessing then astray
Together they may stand but divided they will end
Please god please let there be help ...

  • Author: Ryan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 19th, 2017 20:59
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please note this is my first ever attempt at one of these.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • User favorite of this poem: clair jane.


  • clair jane

    This is so beautiful, I would've never guessed this was your first. You have amazing writing skills

    • Ryan

      Thanks it means a lot but yea I’m only 16 so it’s all kinda new to me

      • clair jane

        I'm 14, and my work means a lot to me too 🙂

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